Documentary - Script Meeting w/ presenter

We had our second script feedback session with Helen today and she seemed much happier with the script, we are still having trouble deciding what our presenter Kamran is going to say as we are not fully sure what the outcome of the documentary will be.

Helen suggested finding a way to link the documentary together more as things are rather blocky and unconnected.

We also added up all the people we are going to talk to and found it would be almost 20 people, these include.

5 - VOX at London
5 - VOX at Berlin Memorial
3 - Holocaust Survivors
2 - Imperial War Musuem
1 - Jewish Museum
1 - Shahak Shapira
1 - Social Media Expert

Helen advised us to drop the 5 VOX in london and maybe drop one person from the Imperial War Museum however Trine wanted to keep the two in the IWM since we are wanted to edit a 20 minute version to hopefully send off to film festivals.

We did however drop the VOX in london as they would take a large amount of time to travel, rig up and film.


After this we had a meeting with Kamran our Narrator over Skype so we could build up a better rapport and listen to any ideas or suggestions he had, It was good as he seemed genuinely interested in the project and not just in it for the screen time.