Transitions - Change of Idea

Today I spoke to Simon about my script idea, in my idea I wanted to do the following.



•For my script I would like to rewrite the first episode of the show
•Change how Nagate gets his garde, he steals it when he hears the gauna are approaching
•Been brought up to hate gauna with an almost radicalized passion
•Towards the end of his grandfathers life he got obsessed with teaching nagate about piloting and self-defence to the point of beating Nagate if he did it wrong
•Nagate will be socially inept, cannot handle large crowds

Simon discussed the possibility of me writing my own episode for the show, I warmed to the idea and decided to change my plan of re-writing an episode and instead write a completely new episode. 

For my idea for the new episode, I wanted to do something which is tied in with the inhabitants of Sidonia turning to Genetic Engineering to solve problems like food shortages and replication. My idea is that instead of first turning to those ideas, what if they initially tried to create half human/half machines instead. 

These were my main ideas

1)The story would consist of an old experiment waking up and wreaking havoc in Sidonia, Nagate the main protagonist would try to reason with the creature as he relates to growing up in solitude.

2)The story would be about a failed experiment which killed its creators, unable to kill the rampaging creature they locked it away in a room to starve. A hundred years later the creature finally escapes, however he is peaceful to Nagate and wishes to help fight against the Gauna

3) This idea mainly follows a failed experiment who has been training in a Pilot Simulation pod for a hundred years, he finds a way to transfer his consciousness to a Garde Chassis and becomes the first unmanned Garde which is successful against the Gauna.

I decided to mix between my second and third idea and have something befall the experiment, perhaps he was not accepted by the people and they attacked him or the main antagonist in the show Ochiai wanted the experiment killed before it could reveal any of its creators secrets, the experiment would then transfer its personality into a garde unit and would help Nagate and his fellow pilots on their missions.